by Jamie
BOOM! CRACK! I heard something that sounded like gun shots. I thought it came from the other side of the trees. So I went to go check, and you’d never believe what I saw. It was a big wooden ship! I didn’t believe my eyes. Then before I could run back to tell my village, I saw what looked like people coming off the ship! I didn’t know what to do, I didn’t know if I should get Sammoset, so I observed.
Dear Jamie,
I really like your story. The part when you said you couldn’t believe your eyes really made me think what could it be? I really like the BOOM!CRACK! part too.
Great beginning to your story Jamie! I can’t wait to read the rest of it!
-Mom
hi jamie i really like how you exprest the carecter (:
Great job Jamie I like how you where being all mysterious at the end. The class did the Lego’s one and i was going to do some thing like this one.